Tag: Writing

Immersion Assembly.

Immersion Assembly:

Make it Work

 

This morning we had our Immersion Assembly. Your job is to write a recount about it, and talk about what you enjoyed so much about their performance.

 

Planning 

Team # What did they do? What are they focussing on?
Team 4 Team 4 did a movie about outdoor furniture also they are learning about empathise,define,and solution. Our following focus question is what we design,create to improve our Team 4 outdoor area .
1st I enjoyed What I enjoyed about the team 5 one because I enjoyed how mr wiseman roasted mr moran. Team 5 following the focus question is how can we fix team 5. 
2nd I enjoyed What I enjoyed about Team 3 is I liked how they were funny and put a lot of expression. Team 3 Following focus is what can team 3 make with no electricity.

 

Now that you have finished your plan, start writing your story. Don’t forget:

  • Write it in an order of events.
  • Be descriptive, share as many details as you can.
  • Use correct sentence punctuation, and try experimenting with others.
  • Group your ideas into paragraphs.

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Start your writing here:

 

→ On monday 9 october (first day of term 4) In the morning we got ready outside in a line to go to an immersion assembly in the school hall. We walked to the hall and said that our question for this term is called make it work. We went to the hall for the immersion assembly so we need to know what we are learning about for this term.

 

This term team 4 made a movie about empathise,define and solution. What team 4 is learning about is where can we put our bags and where to sit outside our bay area. Team 4 focus question is how can we design,create to improve our team 4 area. What I enjoyed about team 4 is that they get to learn how to build.

 

This term team 5 sang a song about their problems and bob the builder. Team 5 will be learning about their problems. Team 5’s focus question is How can we fix team 5. The thing I enjoyed about team 5 is how they were funny and some roasted.

 

For this term team 3 made a story about electricity. Team 3 is learning about how to make things with no electricity. Team 3 Focus question is What can team 3 make with no electricity. What I enjoyed about team 3 is how they were funny and how they put a lot of expression into their story. 

 

What I am looking forward to this term is camp because I know it would be fun and I am also looking forward to the Manaiakalani film festival because I love going to the movies. I am also looking forward to what we are going to learn this term because I know that it will be fun.

All About Me Writing Template

All About Me Writing Template

 

You have come into a new class and you have a new teacher. I want to get to know you a bit more. Use this writing template to share some things about yourself.

 

What is your name? What are your interests? What are your strengths?

Think about these things and write them down.

 

Planning

Basic details (name, class, teacher) Name, AnneMarie, Class, Room 6, Teacher, Miss Tuia.
Family and culture (siblings, culture) I am tonga, cookland. I have three brothers.
Interests (sports, hobbies, food, movie, etc) Some of the sports that I love to play are netball,rugby,and cricket. My hobby is singing. My favourite food is kfc and my favourite movie is Karate kid.
Strengths (what am I good at) I am good at writing, sports, and dancing.
Goals (what am I hoping to achieve this year?) When I am a year 8 my goal is to become a perfect.

 

With the ideas that you have brainstormed, write them into sentences.

 

Start your writing here  

→ Hi my name is AnneMarie and I am a year 6. I am in room 6 and my teacher is Miss Tuia. My culture is tonga and cookland, I have 3 brothers. Some of the things I do are sports and the sports I play are netball,rugby and cricket. My favourite hobby is singing. My favourite food is kfc and my favourite movie is karate kid. The things I am good at are writing,sports and dancing. My goals are when I am a year 8 I want to become a perfect.

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